Nice, simple, but it's hard to read house forms, still. I don't understand what you are doing--what's the red dot? and where will the type go? This needs words and some pretty compelling ones about building community. You may want to look at attitudes toward community in some specific world city, and design to that. As is, the design looks like the American suburban diaspora, and we're talking about urban health.
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in the thread Megacities Studio: Posters In Development - 17 of 22Posted November 21, 2009
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