Your new line drawing is very good and helps tell you story and concept. The phone in the sketch would benefit from appearing as a solid form and possibly in color. Your method of posting your work for the review is unsatisfactory and is an enigma to the critics that will be trying to use it. Please re- post immediately in the manner that the rest of the class has. Rick
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richard penney
new york, ny, United States
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