Design 21: Social Design Network

I am having trouble seeing the image that you link to, so forgive me if this is addressed by your other images...

I would like to see you make the connection between your research up to this point, your revised mission, and the criteria that have brought you to this particular form. You will need to communicate the analysis that has brought you to this solution/strategy in order to make the most of the critic's feedback (they will be better informed as to your process and thus can critique your direction better if they know how you connected the dots- and what the dots are!) Do not allow your solution or strategy to float there without annotation. That will invite criticism about the form, which is in its infancy in terms of development. What you want now is criticism based on your logic and your process.