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pbeirne

Brooklyn, NY, United States

Faculty at Parsons The New School for Design

Member since March 10, 2008

  • further feedback

    Aid


    In response to Review, posted by Serdar Gizer,
    in the thread Review

    I look forward to seeing how you have incorporated the feedback of critics.

    I thought your presentation was looking good. The boards were greatly improved (the diagram was clear and eliminated all of the superfluous information that had once been there).

    Great testing notes -- now show us how you incorporated the feedback from testing into the design.

    Your technical drawings can be used to communicate your design thinking -- use them to call out where you have made critical decisions and why you have determined certain formal attributes (why this shape/measurement/material, etc). We don't want to take your word for it, we want to see what has been carefully considered vs. what is arbitrary.

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