Beautiful, clear visual presentation. Since information design is such a make-or-break skill for this project, your presentation became a great communication of your capabilities to take on this task - this strengthens your argument for this particular design action, in my mind.
I look forward to seeing the results of your testing - how has the testing impacted your progress?
How have you responded to the feedback summarized here in your work? What have you chosen to weave into your process and why?