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Jacques Lange

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Designer

Member since November 28, 2007

  • Critique

    Communication


    Does this design reflect a(n)...

    • well developed and easily understood concept?

    This a well-executed, powerful and easily understood conceptual solution to a serious problem facing mostly women in many parts of the world. However, it is not clear which of the aspects of the International Human Rights Declaration it addresses. This can be easily rectified by adding a clarifying text line. In addition, the first line of boxed text on the bottle’s label requires some crafting (“…worse than murder [add ‘to’] make the victim suffer forever”).

    • level of social engagement?

    Excellent.

    • understanding of the issues reflected in the poster?

    Excellent.

    • sense of internationalism and accessibility?

    Excellent.

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My Interests

  • Industrial Design
  • Environmental Design
  • Communication Design
  • Fashion Design
  • Audio/Visual Design